Hi! My name is diane!! I'm thirteen yearx old. I'm study at the i.e.s "Drakling"in Fantasise. My hobbies are fly ,sing and dance. I'm good at swim. I'm interested in music and cook. I'm wearing pink and purple body. I am sleeping in the floor and I am listening to music. This is my family. My mother is wearing orangebody.she is in the kitchen. She is cooking a fish. Next to my mother there is my father, he flying in the kitchen and there are some meat. Now, my brother's Jack and Jim. Jack is wearing gray body ok Jim is grey and yellow body. My sister, Sharon,is wearing red and blue body, she is a very beautiful. Finally, they are fantastic.
Saray, 12 years.
2 comments:
Hellow Saray!
your text is very fantastic and you picture is very beautiful.
Also, the text is very original.
kises!!
Hola Saray soc la Sandra Jordà Vázquez de 1-D de la teva classe i et vull comentar una cosa sobre el teu treball:
-Els noms propis van en mayuscula com el que as posat a la primera linea en diane i no en amb minuscula seria: Diane ¿Ho entens?
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